Need experienced players for feedback

[raynes]

So I am in the process of developing my first scenaro. As you can imagine it's story heavy. So I need a few experienced players with strong knowledge of the games lore to try it and give me feedback.

As I am trying to keep the details underwraps I would ask that if you try it, you don't tell anyone of the secrets that I am writing into it. Pretty much what I need is for lore experienced people to play the scenario and tell me if what I am doing fits into things, is a violation of lore, or is just plain unacceptable. I'm also looking for feedback on how I might change it to fit lore more accurratly.

Send me a pm if you are interested.